Kaman's Komic Again

I know it's been a long time coming, but here's the next page of the comic. Technically this isn't the beginning of the story. The beginning is supposed to be with "me", my character getting captured. She's about to get killed but Brian's chara saves her by throwing her into the truck that's taking people to imprisonment camps. I might go back and do that part later. Like I said this isn't for real for real...at least not yet... Please excuse the ridiculous look on Brian's chara's face and the fact that Rachel's chara is missing her little glove thingies and the fact I guess... that neither of them really look like Rachel or Brian ^^;