Kaman's Komic

Okay so like... I'm sposed to be doing this comic based on a dream I had. So I was sketching this out in my sketchbook, testing out the character designs and the overall way the comic is gonna look. I really like this, though I dun guess it's very stylized. That's alright though, I didn't want it to be super cartoony or stylized or anything I wanted mostly to go for dynamics, surfacewise. Also this was an opportunity for me to design Rachel's character which I guess I did. I really like how she looks. *nods approval* Um... I'm still undecided about Mez and Brian's characters. I like the outfit Brian's character wears obviously cuz I designed that separately earlier (cuz it's the uniform all the soldiers have to wear) but I'm not sure about the blindfold thing. You can barely see the freckles! And they're so important for this scene, too... *shakes head* Well whatever, I thought maybe people would wanna check it out so here it is.